Friday, June 23

Paus Astoch aasa..........


On a rainy day around 7:00 pm in the evening, I was in the office and had just finished my daily work (for a change I had work-item that day. Don’t ask what. It was some CSS issue which I hardly know. But as usual with help of team mates I managed to slog it off.)It was very beautiful outside, I guess it was a right to for poets to write something. That day even I decided that I would pick up my pen and write something. Fortunately found my two other friends online (Pranav who is in Banglore and Sourabh who is in US. Both of them experienced writers and obviously better writers than me). On that chat we decided to write poem online and this is what we came up with.

Paus: Tichya mazayatla.........

paus astoch asa, doghana ekatra aanara,
halkech vijes sangun, sarv antare todnara

paus astoch asa, mazya darat padnara,
tichya mazya ghramadhle, kumpanach vahun nenara

paus astoch asa, manaat khol dadalelaa,
tya gaafil kshananchi, aathavan karun denaara

paus astoch asa, mazya parsat kosalnara,
aamhi lavlele rop, aaplya hatane fulavnara

paus astoch asa, tichya sarkha vagnara,
kadhi tari vadal ,kadhi rimzim barasnara

paus astoch asa, tichya sarkhach yenara,
dabakya pavalani yeun, vadalapari barasnara

paus astoch asa, kshanaat veda karnaara,
nustya athavanine, romanch ubhe karnaara

paus astoch asa , tichyasarkhch asanara,
nighun gelyanantar hi, mrudgandh mage thevnara

Paus: Jivan gane ganara.......

paus astoch asa, mukt khali padnaraa,
jivan aakashatle, dharatila denara

paus astoch asa, bebhaan kosaLanaara ,
taaplya dharatila, shant hirve karnaara

paus astoch asa, mrud gandh fulavnaara,
keval eka kshanaat, gaatre trupt karnaara

Paus astoch asa, aadvalanane yenara,
zudupamagil yugulanna, navaach anand denara

Paus: Thoda hava sa thoda nako sa......

paus astoch asa,lahripane vagnara,
saral jaminivar sudha, vakda tirpa padnara

pasu aastoch asa, hahakar majavnara,
gharat pani ,pan taki mokli thevnara

paus astoch asa, khoop kahi denaara,
kadhi deta deta , khoop kahi nenaara

paus astoch asa, thoda manavirudh vagnara,
magta na padnara,padta na thambnara

Paus astoch asa, tredha tirpit udavnara,
gadivar topi an, haatatli chatri udavnara

Paus astoch asa, suryalahi zakolnara,
dharevar barastanahi, sarvatra hahakar majavnara

Paus: Aathavanincha......

paus astoch asa, hava teva yenaara,
dolyatle khare paani, jagaapasun lapavnaara

paus astoch asa, kagadi hodyat ramnara,
balpaniche ole kshan, haati thevun janara

paus astoch asa, hrudayala bhidnara,
uri japalelya najuk aathvanna, algad jage karnara

paus astoch asa, mazya daarat padnaara,
dokyavarchya chhataachi, jaaniv karun denaara

paus astoch asa, smuriti jagya karnara,
mag aathvanincha rastahi, chimb chimb bhijavnara

3 comments:

Shreyas Navare said...

Paus astoch asa, vadhdivsala padnaaraa,
Mitraanchya planning var, panich pani otnaaraa..

Paus astoch asa, madhyech dhodho padnaara,
Ervi zoplelya kavirayaanna, khalbalun pravrut karnaaraa.

Paus astoch asa, mitraasarkha yenaara,
Varshabhar daatlelya shubhechha,vadhdivshi denaaraa!

Happy b day once again Ninu!

Anonymous said...

I want not agree on it. I over nice post. Specially the designation attracted me to review the unscathed story.

Anonymous said...

Genial dispatch and this post helped me alot in my college assignement. Thank you as your information.